Kia Ora bloggers, Matteo here.
2023 I made it into Eden Albert Athletics team for the coming 1st 200M and on the day of Eden albert I somehow came second in my heat for 200M and then came Second again in the 200 meters Finals! We had to use show don’t tell to create this writing and I tried my best to use what I learnt about show don’t tell. Here is my writing about that moment of running.
Here is the Picture of the moment after the Race. (It is very low quality)
My heart was pumping as my eyes focused on a swishing figure sprinting far ahead of me. The first sweating person crossed the finish line, I knew I couldn’t be first but there was always second! Noisily, the crowd was courageously cheering but my mind focused on the finish line quickly approaching. As my rough foot touches the victorious line, my brain starts to celebrate knowing that I have come second! My legs crumble and I fall down on the ground unable to stand back up. Even though I knew I didn’t get first, I was proud I got second! Heart Filled with excitement as my brain raced off when my parents would find out that I came second!
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Blog ya later, Matteo.